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March 9, 2024

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Section sizes

Section size for Susla (36 sections)
Section name	Byte count	Cume
_LEAD_	7,358	7,358
Etymology	2,447	2,447
History	15	25,925
Early human settlements	2,023	2,023
Susla genocide	3,317	3,317
Juañero Civil War	1,986	1,986
Fall of San Juan	2,770	2,770
Use as an anti-piracy port	2,721	2,721
Under the Captaincy General of Rakeo	3,878	3,878
Creeperopolis–Rakeo dispute	7,274	7,274
Modern era	1,941	1,941
Geography	1,118	8,939
Topology	1,993	1,993
Climate	4,017	4,017
Ecology	1,811	1,811
Demographics	115	3,342
Ethnicity	1,401	1,401
Religion	617	617
Rakeoian defectors	1,209	1,209
Government	18	9,112
Municipalities	3,895	3,895
Politics	2,323	2,323
Military	1,698	1,698
Infrastructure	1,178	1,178
Economy	821	4,982
Fishing	1,727	1,727
Tourism	1,841	1,841
Other sectors	593	593
Education	746	746
Culture	15	2,310
Viceroyal symbols	802	802
Cuisine	835	835
Public holidays	658	658
See also	148	148
Notes	27	27
External links	405	405
Total	65,741	65,741

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Worldbuilding Review (partial)

Lede

Inaccuracy, Rakeo is not east of Susla.

Fixed, was 0 iq

Etymology

When did the name Susla appear?

Timeframe specified.

Why is the page “Susla” (or why has it become the predominant way to refer to the island in Jackian?)

Reason given.

Those non latin characters for kinwita don’t render for me.

Template:Contains special characters added (aka, skill issue).

“Some archeologists and historians” and “Other historians” could have balance problems, which side has more academic credibility if anyone?

Credibility given (maybe)

Early human settlements

Radiocarbon dating, not “radio carbon-dating”,

Fixed.

“have been disputed by some archeologists” who? Are they credible?

changed to "have not been universally accepted by all archeologists" since going into who is redundant here

There’s a double however in here.

bruh. fixed

“Some argue” Who? (I know that’s probably my problem/writing for that last bit).

changed to "a minority of archeologists" since again going into "who" probably isnt important

Oral transmission of history is still recording history, might be more accurate to describe them as not having written historical records instead. Otherwise all good.

Fixed

Susla genocide

This section looks fine.

Spode (talk) 21:12, 9 March 2024 (EST)

@MrSpode42: Repsonded. Creeper (talk) 04:13, 10 March 2024 (EDT)

March 15 2024 Page Review

Lede

"The municipality of Susla consists of 32 islands, islets, and rocks" Should the rocks be mentioned here? I looked at some other pages on islands and they didn't refer to rocks.

History

"Little is known about the native Suslans who inhabited the island as they did not has written historical records outside of very few carved inscriptions" Replace "has" with "have", tense issue.
"instead, living in an assortment of villages" comma here seems unneeded

Government

The table Largest settlements of Susla (as of 2020 census) has Mayor and Established categories mixed up
Are those translations for 'southernmost stronghold' and 'fascist penal colony' needed? I think we've nixed those in the past
"military base compliments around 1,800 military personnel" maybe change this to "has a compliment of 1,800 military personnel". I'm not sure compliments works there.

Other than that, this looks really good!

Talk:Susla

Worldbuilding Review (partial)

March 15 2024 Page Review

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