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== March 15 2024 Page Review == | == March 15 2024 Page Review == |
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Worldbuilding Review (partial)
Lede
- Inaccuracy, Rakeo is not east of Susla.
- Fixed, was 0 iq
Etymology
- When did the name Susla appear?
- Timeframe specified.
- Why is the page “Susla” (or why has it become the predominant way to refer to the island in Jackian?)
- Reason given.
- Those non latin characters for kinwita don’t render for me.
- Template:Contains special characters added (aka, skill issue).
- “Some archeologists and historians” and “Other historians” could have balance problems, which side has more academic credibility if anyone?
- Credibility given (maybe)
Early human settlements
- Radiocarbon dating, not “radio carbon-dating”,
- Fixed.
- “have been disputed by some archeologists” who? Are they credible?
- changed to "have not been universally accepted by all archeologists" since going into who is redundant here
- There’s a double however in here.
- bruh. fixed
- “Some argue” Who? (I know that’s probably my problem/writing for that last bit).
- changed to "a minority of archeologists" since again going into "who" probably isnt important
- Oral transmission of history is still recording history, might be more accurate to describe them as not having written historical records instead. Otherwise all good.
- Fixed
Susla genocide
- This section looks fine.
Spode (talk) 21:12, 9 March 2024 (EST)
March 15 2024 Page Review
Lede
- "The municipality of Susla consists of 32 islands, islets, and rocks" Should the rocks be mentioned here? I looked at some other pages on islands and they didn't refer to rocks.
History
- "Little is known about the native Suslans who inhabited the island as they did not has written historical records outside of very few carved inscriptions" Replace "has" with "have", tense issue.
- "instead, living in an assortment of villages" comma here seems unneeded
Government
- The table Largest settlements of Susla (as of 2020 census) has Mayor and Established categories mixed up
- Are those translations for 'southernmost stronghold' and 'fascist penal colony' needed? I think we've nixed those in the past
- "military base compliments around 1,800 military personnel" maybe change this to "has a compliment of 1,800 military personnel". I'm not sure compliments works there.
Other than that, this looks really good!
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