Difference between revisions of "Talk:Susla"

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== Worldbuilding Review (partial) ==
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'''Lede'''
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Paragraph #1 - Inaccuracy, Rakeo is not east of Susla.
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'''Etymology'''
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Paragraph #1 - When did the name Susla appear? Why is the page “Susla” (or why has it become the predominant way to refer to the island in Jackian?)
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Paragraph #2 - Those non latin characters for kinwita don’t render for me. “Some archeologists and historians” and “Other historians” could have balance problems, which side has more academic credibility if anyone?
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'''Early human settlements'''
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Paragraph #1 - Radiocarbon dating, not “radio carbon-dating”, “have been disputed by some archeologists” who? Are they credible? There’s a double however in here. “Some argue” Who? (I know that’s probably my problem/writing for that last bit).
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Paragraph #2 - Oral transmission of history is still recording history, might be more accurate to describe them as not having written historical records instead. Otherwise all good.
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'''Susla genocide'''
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This section looks fine.
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--[[User:MrSpode42|Spode]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 21:12, 9 March 2024 (EST)

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Worldbuilding Review (partial)

Lede Paragraph #1 - Inaccuracy, Rakeo is not east of Susla.

Etymology Paragraph #1 - When did the name Susla appear? Why is the page “Susla” (or why has it become the predominant way to refer to the island in Jackian?) Paragraph #2 - Those non latin characters for kinwita don’t render for me. “Some archeologists and historians” and “Other historians” could have balance problems, which side has more academic credibility if anyone?

Early human settlements Paragraph #1 - Radiocarbon dating, not “radio carbon-dating”, “have been disputed by some archeologists” who? Are they credible? There’s a double however in here. “Some argue” Who? (I know that’s probably my problem/writing for that last bit).

Paragraph #2 - Oral transmission of history is still recording history, might be more accurate to describe them as not having written historical records instead. Otherwise all good.

Susla genocide This section looks fine.

--Spode (talk) 21:12, 9 March 2024 (EST)

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