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+ | == Official:tm: Review == | ||
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+ | * No birth date in first sentence | ||
+ | * Rakhmani-born can be shortened to Rakmani in first sentence | ||
+ | * RKT and QSC trigrams should be in front of currency figures they’re representing | ||
+ | * Tzar should be lowercase throughout | ||
+ | * Years should no be possessive (2000’s) | ||
+ | * State Council should be linked when mentioned in the lede | ||
+ | * In the wiki date format, don’t put a comma after the month | ||
+ | * Elbrus needs to be linked at first mention | ||
+ | * Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great. | ||
+ | * “Communism was spreading like a plague throughout southern Ostlandet and Rakhman intended to prevent it from entering its borders” maintain NPOV | ||
+ | * “many expected a war to breakout”- Who is many, and ‘breakout’ needs to be two separate words | ||
+ | * Beginning at a young age, Voronin would begin to prove his intellectual ability.” is fluffy/puffery and could be removed. | ||
+ | * University should be lowercase unless it starts a sentence or is part of a name | ||
+ | * “The two purchased a large chunk of land” Chunk is probably not the right word here, and how large was it? | ||
+ | * Yingtai Feng should be referred to as Yingtai after their introduction, and not linked beyond the first mention in the main text. | ||
+ | * Rakman has been linked multiple times, should only be linked on first mention | ||
+ | * The page mentions Georges Loupe, but needs a link to the page at the mention | ||
+ | * Left-wing coups happen “in” countries, not “on” them. | ||
+ | * Kivu should only be linked on first mention | ||
+ | * Tzardom should be lowercase | ||
+ | * Tzar and State Council should only be linked on first mention | ||
+ | * Paragraph breaks are needed throughout | ||
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+ | --[[User:MrSpode42|Spode]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 21:56, 27 August 2023 (EDT) |
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Official:tm: Review
- No birth date in first sentence
- Rakhmani-born can be shortened to Rakmani in first sentence
- RKT and QSC trigrams should be in front of currency figures they’re representing
- Tzar should be lowercase throughout
- Years should no be possessive (2000’s)
- State Council should be linked when mentioned in the lede
- In the wiki date format, don’t put a comma after the month
- Elbrus needs to be linked at first mention
- Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great.
- “Communism was spreading like a plague throughout southern Ostlandet and Rakhman intended to prevent it from entering its borders” maintain NPOV
- “many expected a war to breakout”- Who is many, and ‘breakout’ needs to be two separate words
- Beginning at a young age, Voronin would begin to prove his intellectual ability.” is fluffy/puffery and could be removed.
- University should be lowercase unless it starts a sentence or is part of a name
- “The two purchased a large chunk of land” Chunk is probably not the right word here, and how large was it?
- Yingtai Feng should be referred to as Yingtai after their introduction, and not linked beyond the first mention in the main text.
- Rakman has been linked multiple times, should only be linked on first mention
- The page mentions Georges Loupe, but needs a link to the page at the mention
- Left-wing coups happen “in” countries, not “on” them.
- Kivu should only be linked on first mention
- Tzardom should be lowercase
- Tzar and State Council should only be linked on first mention
- Paragraph breaks are needed throughout