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== Feedback ==
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Throughout the article, there are lists of cities and other locations, which might be better suited to being linked to as stand-alone lists rather than being put wholesale into the article prose (see: WP:SPLITLIST).
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Other than agricultural land, the valleys do have some significant settlements, the largest of which being Wodai, but others include Sanzhong, Taimali, Dali, Shuangliao, Lancheng, Ren'ai, Qidong, Wufeng and Lu'an.
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(a total of 10 settlements are listed, which feels excessive)
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Percentages are marked with the percentage sign, %, rather than it being written out as a word, which for non-scientific/​non-technical pages is specified as standard (see: MOS:PERCENT).
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Throughout there are instances of things being linked multiple times, which is sometimes encouraged, but the general rule of thumb is to try and link things only once when they are first mentioned (see: MOS:LINKONCE).
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Some sections have general statements which could use more specificity to make them less subjective- For example:
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The formations have caused Shannan to receive incredible amounts of attention from geographic experts and tourists alike.
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Incredible amounts of attention is a subjective description, but specifying how many tourists and what universities or scientists have spent time researching the area would make it more objective and informative.
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Overall, this was a great submission, thank you for participating!
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[[User:MrSpode42|Your mother is a disreputable person]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 16:11, 30 July 2023 (EDT)

Latest revision as of 16:11, 30 July 2023

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Feedback

Throughout the article, there are lists of cities and other locations, which might be better suited to being linked to as stand-alone lists rather than being put wholesale into the article prose (see: WP:SPLITLIST).

Example: … Other than agricultural land, the valleys do have some significant settlements, the largest of which being Wodai, but others include Sanzhong, Taimali, Dali, Shuangliao, Lancheng, Ren'ai, Qidong, Wufeng and Lu'an.

(a total of 10 settlements are listed, which feels excessive)

Percentages are marked with the percentage sign, %, rather than it being written out as a word, which for non-scientific/​non-technical pages is specified as standard (see: MOS:PERCENT).

Throughout there are instances of things being linked multiple times, which is sometimes encouraged, but the general rule of thumb is to try and link things only once when they are first mentioned (see: MOS:LINKONCE).

Some sections have general statements which could use more specificity to make them less subjective- For example:

The formations have caused Shannan to receive incredible amounts of attention from geographic experts and tourists alike.

Incredible amounts of attention is a subjective description, but specifying how many tourists and what universities or scientists have spent time researching the area would make it more objective and informative.

Overall, this was a great submission, thank you for participating!

Your mother is a disreputable person (talk) 16:11, 30 July 2023 (EDT)

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