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Official:tm: Review
- Dates are inconsistent
- First sentence of lede has preposition at the end of a list, which is confusing
- Qingshen Insurance Company should be linked
- ₵20 billion, ₵50 million, ₵200 million should have QSC before it to specify the currency
- “bachelors in economics” —> “Bachelor’s in Economics” needs capitalization and punctuation
- Education in infobox should be under parameter alma_mater
- “born in September 1955” should include full date
- Yingtai Financial Services doesn’t need to have translations in the main text (applies to other nouns throughout).
- “Zheng Yan” should be linked
- had recently arrested Monsilva's military dictator (who?)
- “around ₵500 million today” avoid relative time, use year instead
- Only link once throughout
- “investment from the Government of Majocco”, government should be lowercase, Majocco should be linked.
- “mid 1995” should have a dash
- “involving the Chairman of the company”- Chairman should be lowercase
- “Other charities Yingtai has donated significant amounts of money too” - Has incorrect version of “to”
- Twitter should be linked
- “Yingtai was fined ¥1.8 million (₵300,000)” - Use currency trigrams in front of each (MSY and QSC in this case)
- "during 2004-2005" -> "between 2004 and 2005"
- "and are still married as of 2023" should be removed
- “multiple famous Monsilvans including former President of Monsilva” (president should be lowercase)
- MBS documentary Fame Comes From Struggles (成名源于奋斗; 2016) -> 2016 MBS documentary Fame Comes From Struggles.
