Talk:Vászoly Boldizsár

{{#assessment:TRA World Building|GA|NA}}

• Birth and death locations in Infobox must be linked
• Nationality should be Entropanian
• “would produce world peace, through” this comma need not exist
• Charterist Movement should be linked, and the “Charterist Movement of Entropan, who made” who here should be which, because the movement is not a person
• For some headers in the biography section, the capitalization is incorrect (Illness and death is proper form)
• “due to the large diaspora of Quebecshirite and Reykani people”, link to the ethnic groups here
• Rockr and Uryha should be linked earlier
• “called "La Esperanto"” this should be italicized (MOS:Italics), and linked on first mention
• Tiroler and University of Maledonia both need to be linked
• Ilisarititsineq aamma Oqaatsinut Nunat Tamalaanut Periaatsit Tunngaviusut should be linked on first mention
• Daily Worker should be italicized (MOS:Italics) throughout
• Eqqissinermut Oqaatsit? shouldn’t be in quotes
• Esperanto-veq Ilisarititsineq should be linked
• Dua Libro should not be in quotation marks and should be italicized (MOS:Italics),
• Massacre should be lowercase for Grassmarket massacre
• “The motion passed by a vote of 612 for, and 578 against” doesn’t need comma
• 1907 Entropanian general strike should be linked in the main text
• “1906/1907 parliamentary session” en dash should be used in place of forward slash
• “Introduction of a Unified Language to Overcome Linguistic Separation within Entropan” should not be in quotation marks and should be italicized (MOS:Italics),
• “This Bill” bill should be lowercase
• “all official Government communications” government should be lowercase
• All poem names, original works, and periodicals should be italicized (MOS:Italics),
• Hero of Entropan and Founder of Entropan should be linked

--Spode (talk) 22:39, 27 August 2023 (EDT)