Talk:Gabriel Stone

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Comma is inside of quotations within the first sentence.
No parenthetical after birth date in the lede
First name is being used rather than last name throughout lede
Birth date in infobox needs to use specific template
Not in nation category Avigilon
Puffy/Flowery prose in some parts throughout that sounds un-encyclopedic, “caught on to his education quickly”, “easily graduating”- Possible NPOV problems.
Link only on first mention throughout lede for Sacred Path Society, Eris Temblor, and Draven
Lede is a long block of text with no paragraph breaks, which makes it difficult to read

Spode (talk) 17:53, 27 August 2023 (EDT)