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| + | == Official:tm: Review == | ||
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| + | “July 7th riots” should be “July 7 riots” or “7 July riots” unless the government recognizes “July 7th riots” as the official way to refer to the event | ||
| + | FreeShinemori could use a link for explaining why this was controversial, or at least to what Shinemori is, likewise with the Stepadnó white-red-white flag | ||
| + | Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great. | ||
| + | What was the motive behind the Union Preservation Division’s assassination and who are they? | ||
| + | In Early life, events should be marked with years of occurrence rather than how old Lučanok was at the time | ||
| + | “It was revealed” is odd phrasing. | ||
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| + | [[User:MrSpode42|Spode]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 18:44, 27 August 2023 (EDT) | ||
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“July 7th riots” should be “July 7 riots” or “7 July riots” unless the government recognizes “July 7th riots” as the official way to refer to the event FreeShinemori could use a link for explaining why this was controversial, or at least to what Shinemori is, likewise with the Stepadnó white-red-white flag Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great. What was the motive behind the Union Preservation Division’s assassination and who are they? In Early life, events should be marked with years of occurrence rather than how old Lučanok was at the time “It was revealed” is odd phrasing.
