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| − | “Posthumously, he participated”- What? You can't really participate in wargaming out government responses when you're dead. | + | * “Posthumously, he participated”- What? You can't really participate in wargaming out government responses when you're dead. |
| − | Ambierle and Audrecelles should be linked in the main text, not just the infobox | + | * Ambierle and Audrecelles should be linked in the main text, not just the infobox |
| − | Disease Control and Prevention Agency should be linked to | + | * Disease Control and Prevention Agency should be linked to |
| − | Specify date when La Fontaine became Chief of the Epidemic Intelligence Bureau | + | * Specify date when La Fontaine became Chief of the Epidemic Intelligence Bureau |
| − | Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great. | + | * Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great. |
| − | “It was rational and feasible to duplicate this in every country on the planet” is very subjective. | + | * “It was rational and feasible to duplicate this in every country on the planet” is very subjective. |
| − | QSC is the trigram for Quebecshirite Credits, QS isn’t used | + | * QSC is the trigram for Quebecshirite Credits, QS isn’t used |
| − | Sections are not completed | + | * Sections are not completed |
--[[User:MrSpode42|Spode]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 19:19, 27 August 2023 (EDT) | --[[User:MrSpode42|Spode]] ([[User talk:MrSpode42|talk]]) 19:19, 27 August 2023 (EDT) | ||
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Official:tm: Review
- “Posthumously, he participated”- What? You can't really participate in wargaming out government responses when you're dead.
- Ambierle and Audrecelles should be linked in the main text, not just the infobox
- Disease Control and Prevention Agency should be linked to
- Specify date when La Fontaine became Chief of the Epidemic Intelligence Bureau
- Starting a sentence with “However”- Not against the Manual of Style, but grammatically not great.
- “It was rational and feasible to duplicate this in every country on the planet” is very subjective.
- QSC is the trigram for Quebecshirite Credits, QS isn’t used
- Sections are not completed
