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This article is written in Kernevic Jackian, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, travelled, centre, realise, defence, artefact), and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other varieties of Jackian. According to the relevant style guide, this should not be changed without broad consensus.
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Lijëndes Ladines should be linked
“father of Rhaetian mythology” should be in quotation marks
Lijëndes Ladines should be italicized (MOS:Italics)
Aquila Tirolensis should have some context about what it is, also should be italicized (MOS:Italics)
[Margreta] (brackets should be replaced with commas)
“1422 – 1471”, “(1884 – 1889)” remove spaces between en-dash
Zira needs to be linked at first mention in the main text
Education section could be merged into childhood
Aquila Tironlensis should be linked in the article proper, not just the lede
Tiroler civil war should be linked
Marmoleda Glacier should be linked
Aut Dolomita should be linked
Link to №22 Battalion Trentin Volunteers (since this is in english, it should be written as 22nd with a cardinal)
Civil war should be lowercase
“ancient Ladin” should be linked
Before it mentions the name change, he should be referred to as Macelé, and after the name change it should be Gana (Creeper believes this to be correct)
Frederic Marzia should be linked
Carador Publishing House should be italicized (MOS:Italics)
Francois should have a ç
“Quebecshirite political scientist, Francois Boulanger,” these commas do not need to be here
“He opposed trade unionism and organised volunteer efforts to break rail strikes in and near Maran.” needs a comma to distinguish whether or not he was opposing the breaking of the rail strikes or if that was context to support the first claim.
There are blank lines at the end of the Writing subheading